It’s over, I said
Now nothing can heal the scar
Scar of betrayal!
Written for Haiku Horizons
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Haiku is a traditional form of a Japanese poetry that consists of 3 lines, following a 5-7-5 syllable rule (first and third line 5 syllables, middle line 7 syllables). They don’t necessarily have to rhyme.
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very thoughtful Haiku. such scars never heal.
ReplyDeleteYeah.. never ever!
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Clear as a bell! Great photo shot!
ReplyDeleteI love this photo too!
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There are things even time can't heal. Well written
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Nice Haiku,Geetika.
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
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direct, succinct.
ReplyDeletethough traditionally Haikus were supposed to have a line for the season, this one is complete in itself.
Thanks a lot Pooja :)
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Time to move on!
ReplyDeleteYup..
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But we always hope that the scars too would heal, don't we? Nice lines.
ReplyDeleteYeah.. it's hope only, that keeps us going!
DeleteThanks Beloo
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Time will. I don't know the dose yet, but some day it surely will.
ReplyDeleteI guess.. as they say, time heals all the wounds!
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OH no.. they say time heals but some scars are such you remember them till the end .. been so many years I remeber each SECOND as it happened
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As they say.. some scar can never be healed!
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Nice take of the prompt !
ReplyDeleteThanks Milan :)
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Poignant!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa :)
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