People adore her beauty
In spite of the thorns she has
Of cruelty and smugness!
Written for Haiku Horizon- Thorn
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Haiku is a traditional form of a Japanese poetry that consists of 3 lines, following a 5-7-5 syllable rule (first and third line 5 syllables, middle line 7 syllables). They don’t necessarily have to rhyme.
so close to reality. Nice :)
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Beware the woman's thorns! Very nice.
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I love reading haiku. This one got me tickling. We know all too well that beauty gets its way even being cruel. Great job putting it in haiku form!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Parmita. What you said is right. It's like a paranoia..
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Sadly everyone succumbs to beauty!
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Very well written. Beauty is only skin deep, people overlook this fact.
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The deadly thorns of beauty!
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Very well said Tina :)
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and how real it is :-) Cheers!
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Too true!
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One is optional. Beauty fades. Thorns may (or may not - choice time!) get sharper.
ReplyDeleteThat's true..
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