A
thousand feet above
High
in the sky, an eagle locates
pond
to quench her thirst!
Written
for Haiku Horizons
Happy
Reading
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Haiku is a traditional form of a Japanese poetry that consists of 3 lines, following a 5-7-5 syllable rule (first and third line 5 syllables, middle line 7 syllables). They don’t necessarily have to rhyme.
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And quenches the thirst...
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Thanks :)
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Really lovely read!
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Nicely done. But while writing haikus please try to follow the 5-7-5 syllable rule. It makes it more authentic.
ReplyDeleteYour thoughts and emotions are at the right place :)
Hey Soumya,
DeleteThanks for the correction. Your comment made me read the haiku again. I first wrote the haiku, then read it, realized the error and then edited it, but by mistake published the non-edited/wrong one.. That is why was wondering, what went wrong.
Now corrected..
Thank you once again!
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Love your haiku..as is.:)
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Thanks Alice :)
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