“I love you, always have always will”
“But I’m married! It’s a sin that I don’t want to commit”
“We’ve shared each other from last 10 years, Mary! Your marriage cannot stop me from loving you”
“You make me feel alive but it’s not right”
“See! And sharing a few moments of your life with me is harmless!”
“My soul doesn’t approves”
“It doesn’t have to. You just have to love me back”
In the myriad of emotions, she gave in. She was crushed when she learnt that he flirted and slept with every other girl he met, including her sister!
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I am participating in April A to Z Blogging Challenge and my theme for this year is Feelings and Emotions in 101 words. This year I'm also a supporter on co-host AJ’s team as wHooligans, along with Shilpa Garg, LuAnn Braley and Doreen McGettigan. Keep visiting, keep sharing and keep showing the love in the comments box ;)
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I am participating in April A to Z Blogging Challenge and my theme for this year is Feelings and Emotions in 101 words. This year I'm also a supporter on co-host AJ’s team as wHooligans, along with Shilpa Garg, LuAnn Braley and Doreen McGettigan. Keep visiting, keep sharing and keep showing the love in the comments box ;)
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What a creep! I hope she left him for good.
ReplyDeleteYes.. He will learn his lesson one day..
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Aww...such a cheat! Hope someone dumps him!
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Someone surely will.. Every dog has its day..
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ohh that's terrible!! Hope he gets a lesson soon.
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He sure will.. For Karma is a bitch!
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What goes around, comes back! He can't get away with that surely!
ReplyDeleteI really hope so!
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Ah Fk he was a player it seems! Sad he ruined her life too like her sisters :( feeling sad for the girl..
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So did I.. I think his karma will see to it for sure..
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That's so sick! Gosh! Wish she had known this was lust and not love. Well written Geetika. Simple and interesting!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Parul :) You keep me going!
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Heart is a big space. Can love many. Marriage cannot come in its way.
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Yes, heart is a big space.. But one person at a time, I guess!
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You have captured her emotions very well! good going!
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Thanks a ton Arhcana.. :)
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very nice Geets! That man needs a big thappad!
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Ha ha.. And your comment gave me my much needed giggle :)
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uh oh! The betrayer got betrayed too...
ReplyDeleteShubhangi @ The Little Princess
He will.. for sure one day..Or may be he already has gotten, he just doesn't know about it..
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That's a quick twist! 10 Years?! It is sad when one has more than just one face! :(
ReplyDeleteAnd what's even more sad is the person with who you stay is so oblivious to all these faces!
DeleteCreep! I hate such cruel human beings!
ReplyDeleteMe too..!
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Ugh. I just cannot understand the psychology of people who cheat and get cheated on.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful post, in a twisted way :D
I agree with on this..
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Thats terrioble!!! I would always want to stay away from such people.
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Me too! But it ain't easy to figure them out right?
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Ooops...he was such a cheat. he would get his lessons soon.
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I so hope so Sushree :)
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Such a short and precise tale to express so many emotions! Loved the choice of words. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Nikita :) It really means a lot!
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Sad story. But well written.
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God! What a two-faced cheat!!
ReplyDeleteI know!!!
DeleteWhat a twist to the tale! Nice. :)
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Thank you so much Inder :)
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What a disgusting man. She should him teach him a lesson or two.
ReplyDeleteWho knows if she's already taught him one ;)
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I loved the post so much. You know what, I was trying to comment here int he morning. But I wasn't getting this box to type! Weird, I know!
ReplyDeleteSo, here I am again! Couldn't just just leave without commenting, could I!
Fab write!
Oops, I'm sorry, if something went wrong with the blog..
DeleteYou're such a darling Shalini..
Thank you for making my day :)
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Oops! I hope she castrated him when she found out. I would have.
ReplyDeleteLol..! That's the perfect punishment for him I guess..
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Ouch..
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I would be devastated if this happened to me. I hope she recovers in the end.
ReplyDeleteAnd so would I..! We can only hope..
DeleteVery disgusting person.He must learn a lesson:(
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Hope she kicked him hard :D
ReplyDeleteAt the right places.. ;) :P
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B is for beautiful. ..
ReplyDeleteWithout reading the last three lines. . The story till then my comment is..
I read the comments too.. and I differ love does not mean if one gets married it should stop.
Maybe I am wrong..
Love has many faces.. I don't see anything wrong to express your love if you are genuine.
It's just unlucky that the two did not get married.. does love finish for each other immediately. . If it does then it was not love in the first place..
Both were cheating each other then before..
Reading the last three lines..
That is wrong.. It can't be love..
Yes, if they're broken in two different parts then it's quite justified. People tend to find love when they don't seek it in their partners and this is only human. But cheating on every other person is where the line gets crossed..
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Geetika simply written and evocative piece. She betrayed and got betrayed in turn, hope I got that right. Whats to be done- life is a circle and what goes up comes down :)
ReplyDeleteyes, she betrayed and got betrayed. May be that's why it was happening with her..
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written very well !! evokes strong response... I don't know whether I can call it love... most used and abused word today is Love :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words Angela :)
DeleteLove had become quite a complicated thing in today's time..
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A friend faced the same but when I tried to show her reason, she stopped speaking to me. They will face their own music, some day!!
ReplyDeleteO need not worry Vishal. They will see it one day and then remember you. You did your bit.
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Oh God! That didn't turn out to be nice. Sure love knows no boundaries but the endings like these hurt!
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Love never has and will never have any boundary. All is fair in Love and war, I think this sentence is where the entire problem lies!
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