It was a long winter night when
she sat across the narrow sea, thinking about all the people she had lost in
last one year.
What was it that took away
everything from her?
Was it fate or destiny that
brought so much disgrace to her?
And there she sat, sitting,
watching the furious waves, taking away all the belongings from the people
walking around.
That is where she realized the
nature of waves, it takes a lot more than what it brings to the people sitting
on the shore, just like the way it did to her family, drowning and sinking them
deep down and making her the orphan!
Written for Lillie McFerrinwrites- Waves
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ohh..very poignant but slightly philosophical. nice :)
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Thank you for such a lovely post.
ReplyDeleteThe pleasure was all mine Karen :)
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painful...yet philosophical one. Loved the way the story progressed and expressed in five sentences :)
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Thank you so much Sushree :)
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That was a lovely read, well done!
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Poor she!!! This is touching...
ReplyDeleteI know it is..
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Ouch! That hurt.
ReplyDeleteA nice take.
Yes, it does. Thanks :)
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Awesome expression and I just love it...Great!!!
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Oh yes. The feeling of loss.. Well written :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Jyotsna :)
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So sad, that's the wrath of nature!
ReplyDeleteSad, but true..
ReplyDeleteThe bitter-sweet fact of life... Nicely expressed :)
ReplyDeleteIndeed.. Thanks :)
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Lovely post http://www.shilpachandrasekheran.blogspot.ae/?m=1
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa :)
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