You said you loved me to the moon and back. You made sounds, you screamed my name, and you fervently addressed me with various names while we made love.
And then unexpectedly, all the risqué emotions simply vanished!
Why? I waited for you; I skipped meals, walked miles, I stared my phone but couldn’t fall asleep, just so I wouldn’t miss your call... Only to learn you didn’t call at all!
Because she was more attractive than me? Better eyes or hair or better body? What was it that got you?
Clamouring soul, deep inside, only wishes to have you back!
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I am participating in April A to Z Blogging Challenge and my theme for this year is Feelings and Emotions in 101 words. This year I'm also a supporter on co-host AJ’s team as wHooligans, along with Shilpa Garg, LuAnn Braley and Doreen McGettigan. Keep visiting, keep sharing and keep showing the love in the comments box ;)
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I am participating in April A to Z Blogging Challenge and my theme for this year is Feelings and Emotions in 101 words. This year I'm also a supporter on co-host AJ’s team as wHooligans, along with Shilpa Garg, LuAnn Braley and Doreen McGettigan. Keep visiting, keep sharing and keep showing the love in the comments box ;)
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The warning signs are when the affection falls.. good story
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Oh the pain of longing!
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It really is painful!
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The pangs of longing...beautifully done!
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Thank you so much Kala, for encouraging me every single day :)
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O so sad. But enjoyed it.
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Thanks a ton Paromita :)
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Affection and matters of the heart afflicting the mind spelled and expressed in a sensitive manner:)
ReplyDeletebeautifully expressed Vishal!
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How sad... Unrequited love
ReplyDeleteYes, it's always heart breaking!
DeleteSadddd but a part of life. Love gone askew leaves so much bitter-sour stuff and a gaping hole in the heart.
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Love gone can really break the person!
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Ohh unrequited love!! so hard to deal with and even forget!!
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And it takes ages to forget this requited love! Sad but true!
DeleteOh! The pain... Very well expressed!
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Thanks Siriv :)
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Great post, but it made me so sad! Such a rough thing to go through! Lovely writing!
ReplyDeleteYes, that's how life is sometimes!
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No..no...she shouldn't take him back if he came back crawling on all fours!
ReplyDeleteShubhangi @ The Little Princess
And she won't! Of course, he too needs to learn a lesson in life!
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You know it's over, but sadly sometimes that doesn't stop you from longing all the same :(.
ReplyDeleteYes, heart doesn't listens to anyone!
DeleteYou know it's over, but sadly sometimes that doesn't stop you from longing all the same :(.
ReplyDeleteThat's sad! Well written geetika
ReplyDeleteTina From
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Thanks a ton Tina :)
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Liked the word you chose, Longing and very well written, felt sad for this lady
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The universal story of women, no matter where in the world we are. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Alana :)
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The pain of losing love and that longing to get it back- it is so hard!
ReplyDeleteVery very hard!
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