Thursday, 7 April 2016

F- Forlorn


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It was a beautiful day. The bus stopped for a while and we jumped in to munch something.

My wife, beautiful and gentle, stayed cautious of everything around her. She always emphasized on taking proper safety measures.

I asked my son to watch his mom first, observe her and walk exactly like her.

Little did I know that sparkle in my son’s eyes to watch his mother walk the road would be splashed 
into fumes.

Headlines said:

A woman hit by a speeding bus, flipped 25 feet above the ground level. Now in coma, the doctors haven’t said anything about recovery.
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  1. How morbid....but it did leave the boy more devastated than forlorn right?

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    1. Of course it did.. He lost his mother, right in front of his eyes!

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  2. WHAT! *shocked*
    I hope this incident doesn't make the child scared of roads and buses as her grows up :'(

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    1. May be yes, may be no. It is his future that will decide.

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  3. That's really very sad.The boy will must have gone through very tuf times getting out of this.

    Geets, coincidence is that we share the same theme for this challenge.

    Please drop by at:
    http://livetolovelifecrazy.blogspot.com/2016/04/eempathy-z-challenge.html

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  4. Ohhh noooo heartbreaking piece Geetika.

    Sunila just wrote...
    http://sunilavigauthor.blogspot.com.au/2016/04/fullara-devi-sati-and-shiva-alphabet-f.html

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  5. That is such a tragic tale :(

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  6. This may be heart breaking but it does happen all around us every day :(

    Thoughts...Sushree

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    1. And we barely notice, until and unless is happens with someone we know. I know it shouldn't work this way. But, there's always a but!

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  7. Oh I did not see that coming! :( Well written.

    Seena

    #AtoZChallenge- F is for Free Advice

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  8. OMG, that is so tragic! You can be perfectly safe in your actions but the rest of the world isn't bothered! Really sad :(
    @KalaRavi16 from
    Relax-N-Rave

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    1. And what's worse is we can't even do anything about it!

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  9. I was taken aback by the ending, Geets. Thoroughly sad and heart-rending. Your short fictions are a treat to watch, nevertheless. I look forward to them and have a great time reading them!

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    1. Thank you so much Maliny! You're truly a sweetheart and I mean it :)

      Cheers

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  10. So shocking, my God! Very tragic too at the same time to see it happen before his eyes! Keep the posts coming Geets...your posts are great!

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  11. Oh! So tragic! But very well written :)

    Great post :)
    Cheers,
    Srivi
    The Piscean Me | Twitter

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  12. Oh no.. that is bad.. I hope she recoverssssssssss ssssooooooooonnnn

    Bikram's

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  13. Oops! I think you meant "his" mother though.

    Interesting take on forlorn.

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  14. Gosh! That's sooo tragic. Such a thing should never ever happen to anybody!

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    1. I know, but it happens, every single day around us but we barely notice!

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  15. That was too sudden and must have quite shocked the little boy.

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    1. It totally did Tulika!

      Thanks for dropping by :)

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  16. You are doing amazing in this challenge Geet. Now this is creative. Taking smething that actually is a challenge ...Keep it up!

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    1. Thanks a ton Mansi! I had the brightest smile in the morning that you brought to my face! I'm glad you're liking them :)
      Lots of Love to you :)

      Cheers

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    1. We can only hope!
      Thanks for dropping by :)

      Cheers

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  18. I didn't see that one coming either. I guess neither did the mother.

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    1. Of course she didn't. The entire family didn't!

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  19. How tragic!! I hope he doesn't take his father's advice to heart and doesn't follow in his mother's footsteps.

    Shubhangi @ The Little Princess

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    1. He was only showing him her gait and how carefully she does things. But what is meant to happen, definitely happens!

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  20. I was shocked to read this post... imagine the plight of the child, watching his mom in a state of coma...hope she recovers, its very painful to see child in pain..

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    1. It truly was a painful act to witness. My prayers are there for the child!

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  21. oh God! That's have been horrifying for the child! Hope she recovers!

    Nibha @ Expressions

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  22. First of all, I like the word Forlorn and haven't used it for a long. Sad how life is sometimes and cruel to people.

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    1. Thanks for appreciating Vishal :)
      Yes, it indeed is sad!

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