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Thursday 12 March 2015

Refuge

By Boisterous Bee

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In the midst of dark night

Wounded bird took refuge in lying

Beneath the soft feathers of her mother

This Haiku is shared with Haiku Horizons- Refuge

Happy Reading

Cheers

8 Discussion

Soumya13 March 2015 at 12:37
Nice attempt, but one piece of advice.

There is a protocol to be followed while writing haikus. 5-7-5 syllable rule.

Read here: http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/style-and-usage/rules-for-writing-haiku.html

I hope you don't mind the unsolicited advice :)
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KAHKASHAN KHAN13 March 2015 at 20:29
nice very nice. Very well written.
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Amrit Sinha15 March 2015 at 12:53
That would be the perfect healing touch.
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Red Handed16 March 2015 at 19:04
I have no clue how Haiku works..but I found this beautiful. :)
The best healing touch!
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Boisterous Bee16 March 2015 at 19:27
Thanks Red..
Even I'm learning about haikus.. :)

Thanks for dropping by..

Cheers
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Thanks for dropping by :)

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