One last time, just open my eyes
And let me see how things rise
The smoke that I fag
With one more drag,
For I can feel the magic it does
to my senses
And to fight for it, I have all my
ready defenses.
Closed sight, black and white
One last time, I can sense the
spark so bright.
My naked lips, all red and
lecherous
Inviting for all acts so treacherous
Seeking for a man who ruins my lipstick
Smudging & spoiling it with
his charm so mystic!
Just one last time, roll your
fingers on my raw lips
Seduce me and bring sensations
that thrills!
My naked ears, my bare skin
Deep down it’s craving for your
attention
My life has always been in the
dark
Give me some light and show me
some spark!
People say, I’ve gone all astray
Girls like me are for men to play
Smoking, drinking, late night outing
Dancing, drooling, getting clicked
by pouting
Yes, I love it all for your
information
Judge me, label me, or go ahead
with your accusation!
For I will always be what I want
It’s my attitude that I love to
flaunt!
What else can you say than
calling me a slut?!
Please learn to raise your
standards or better keep shut!
One last time, I’m fighting for
myself
Help me discover and find the
lost self!
You may lay your eyes upon me
Bend your legs and sit on your
knee
Or trick me to get into your trap
But one last time, I tear away
your phony strap!
Linking it with Magpie Tales: Mag282
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Oooh nice.. reminds me of a song by Tove Lo :)
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An enchanting piece, well done.
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A deeply felt soul, she is!
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The rhythm of this piece was seductive. A bit sad always searching for hope in all the wrong places.
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Wow!!! I love this spunky woman you have brought out alive with your words :) Good one, Geets!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Aathira.. We need more if the spunky around us.. ;)
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So beautifully depicted the character of a strong willed woman.
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WOW...hat's off to you on this one. I felt inviting in the beginning :)
ReplyDeleteHahah.. Thanks a ton Alok!
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Hi Geetika! Marvelous. Such a lengthy poem and that too a rhyming one. fantabulous.
ReplyDeletehey missed to mention, that it was a bit seductive too. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your kind words Ajay..
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Lovely take on the prompt
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Lovely, Geetika. :)
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Shed all inhibitions and be what you are without caring for the world.
ReplyDeleteLoved the poem.
That's what women should do.. follow their hearts and the rest shall fall in place..
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