Leaving above us this clear sky.
No more heat, no more loo
And I’ll be this happy, I had no clue!
The shedding of leaves
Can be seen from the ground
Standing head held high
Look, what a beauty I found!
Passing by this narrow lane
Envisaging the beauty around us
Life should be like this scenic view
Black and white without any fuss!
No hiding of things,
No treachery whatsoever
No speculations at any cost,
True feelings expressed in best of endeavour!
Just think for a moment
What a glory it may bring
No murkiness, no cheating
Only words of praises that people will sing!
As when things stay hidden
Devastation is the only thing they bring!
Why not just come close to the souls you love
Confess and clear things, and rise above!
For later, it will only be darkness in the future
Duskiness stored for the person of your stature
Just like the trees shoves off its leaves
Standing alone and isolated, ready to be taken away by the thieves!
And when you have it all with you,
Please do not go and become an egoist.
For its love and support of people around you
Your work and their blessings equally coexist!
This post is written for Prompt of the month: A feature of
Writer’s Ezine
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Beautiful, wise thoughts expressed in your poem. No, let's not become egotistical. Let's appreciate those around us.
ReplyDeleteYes.. we should appreciate people around us and learn from them as well..!
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Wonderful post ....
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Shed the leaves of pretense and be what you are meant to be, out in the open...Happiness will follow!
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Thanks Naba :)
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Love these words:
ReplyDeleteAs when things stay hidden
Devastation is the only thing they bring!
Why not just come close to the souls you love
Confess and clear things, and rise above!
So true, if only we could be as uncomplicated as nature itself!
If only.. Sigh!
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there's so much we can learn from nature... to be beautiful in simplicity... no cheating, no treachery ... loved the way you expressed.
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Wise thoughts, beautifully expressed! We can learn so many of life lessons by just observing nature!
ReplyDeleteYes.. only if we really want to ponder and observe and learn from nature!
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I hate summers... And I loved this :)
ReplyDeleteHaha.. Me too..! Hi-fi..!!
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Everything I love about the season and then some in a poem, how cool is that.
ReplyDeleteAnd that's a wonderful rhyme you've created..!!
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Oh, thats a beautiful poem! Loved to read it, and think a bit of the paralells betweeen nature, and the people around me that I love so much:-)
ReplyDeleteHaha.. That sounds wonderful Eli.. Thanks for dropping by :)
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That's a beautiful poem Geets! The art of contemplation brings beautiful words when one can open up their souls. thank you.
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"Confess and clear things, and rise above" - if only more of us were able to do that, really and in all sincerity. So much pain can be avoided. Motivational lines, Geetika!
ReplyDeleteConfessing and clearing leads to so much of relief, if only one decides to do so..
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Very thought provoking poem, Geetika. Ego doesn't allow us to confess and as a reason things aren't clear. Loved the way you've expressed.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ajay.. You always bring a smile :)
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incredible....
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Very well expressed ... that's how we all should live :-)
ReplyDeleteYes we should..
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