That strange stormy night,
All set to make me fright
Eyes all on me
Exasperating and terrifying,
Bringing me on my knee!
But I chose to run,
Run away from all of you
To a place where I could be free from all the woes
Place full of freedom
Place without anyone dumb
Place where I can succumb on happiness
Place where it will let me be
Place where I could just breathe
Place where I could make a choice
Dreams taking dimensions, ready to flee!
I wish you could come along,
I don’t mind even if you don’t
It is always better to have you by my side
Nevertheless, it’s a lonely world, and I should learn to
confide!
You know I always loved wearing skirts
But you never let me don one
They’ll stare, and it won’t look nice
You should know it all, now don’t spoil all the fun!
I just want to run, run and run so far
Oblivious to its ways and nescient to its scars
So what it will hurt,
So what if it makes me fall
It will only teach me something
And make an undaunted soul.
O this night,
This scary, scary night
I dare you come again
And I will welcome you with all the might!
Linking with Magpie Tales- Mag 300
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nice poem, motivates the reader to run from toxic relationships..
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Indeed this approach to brave it all is somuch better than "Once fallen, twice shy" taht so amny of us adopt
ReplyDeleteYes.. very well said Mina :)
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Poetry is not my strong suit but you have filed so much emotion and longing in the poem. Also the harsh truth of our lives as women.
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Thank you so much for your words of encouragement Inder!
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A difficult circumstance ... it's better to find one's own place where our decisions about our lives will not be judged by others.
ReplyDeleteYes, only if making that kind of life was possible!
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Best to get away from a relationship like this one
ReplyDeleteYes.. best solution!
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Nicely written, sometimes the relationships are difficult to carry on with!
ReplyDeleteThanks Alok.. Yes, such relations do more harm than good!
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Good one. May we all be such brave hearts :)
ReplyDeleteMay we!
DeleteThanks for dropping by Jyotsna :)
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Love the brave woman here, who despite her fears is willing to fight with all her might...to be free!
ReplyDeleteI too respect her a lot! Thanks Aditi :)
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